Pages

Monday 16 May 2016

Shoe Narrative


How did they got there?
What happened along the way?
How did they feel?
What did they see?
What did they smell?
What Did they touch?
Ideas
The shoes were left on the ground when it fell out of the car
The shoes fell out of the car when when someone was still driving
The shoes felt lonely because no one wouldn’t take it with them
The shoes saw lots of people looking at the shoes but won’t take it
The shoes smelt like rotten fabric
The shoes touch the ground but also feel puddle and lots raindrops
Why shoes left out



I was just lying around as I saw someone walking towards me,he was going to pick me up but he heard his phone ringing. “Ring, ring, ring.” He picked his phone up and started talking as if it was his boss that was talking to him. He was staring at me like I was staring at him back. He finished talking has he was putting his phone down ,he looked at me as if he was thinking to put me on... He walked towards me and picked me up...  He put one foot in and put another foot in me... Left to Right. We walked out of the house and I heard a puddle call my name. “Lefty, Righty” says the puddle. We walked in the puddle. I was has dirty and wet he didn’t want me again so he took lefty and righty off and started to leave them on the road has he ran away. After a little while,a little boy came and pick me up and started walking me home.

I think that the shoe will find him a life has living on the street and people waking pass.I think someone will find lefty and righty a home.

No comments:

Post a Comment